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HetaliaxAdhd!Asperger!Reader Part 3


You slowly opened you eyes from your dreamless sleep. Wait, why could you only see the dark with your right eye? It was like it was still closed. You start panic and blinked with both of your eyes to try to see with both of your eyes. But all you could see was the dark with your right eye.

"Calm down (Name) it must be the medicine" You thought, well last time you will take their medicine..

You looked out through the window, the sun was about to go down. You walked closer to look out. It wasn't much to see, just some part of the building. You see a bird sitting on one of the roof. It was so pretty in a beautiful, it also calmed you down from the panic.


Hetalia pov


Alfred walked into his room in the building where the world meeting was held. He didn't have to time loosen up his tie until his telephone started to ring.

"'sup?"

"Herro Alfred-san how did it go?" Kiku asked

"Oh Japan dude! Well better than I expected. I didn't know you cared" Alfred said

"Of course I do, we all do, We just don't want to anything stupid" Kiku said

"I understand dude, me and Feliciano have planned to visit her everyday to make the nurses get used to us and then ask to get her out of there" Alfred said

"It's very nobre of you to do something rike this Alfred-san, mind if I go with you and Feri-kun next time?" Kiku asked, Alfred got a bit surprised about he wanted to come. He rather wanted to have you for himself, well Feliciano was with him. And also It might be weird if they meet the same nurse tomorrow and suddenly there is another man with them.

"Sorry pal but I think it is better if it is only me and Feliciano in the beginning. The nurses are quite suspicious to us and it won't be better if we bring you with us" Alfred said hoping Kiku didn't take it personally

"I understand, I hope I wirr see her soon" Kiku said

"I'm sure you will"

"Werr then, goodnight" Kiku said and hung up, Alfred sighed and decided to take a shower



Alfred and Feliciano went to the hospital right after lunch. Everyone at the meeting asked questions about their visit yesterday. They couldn't say much since they didn't talk to you. So the decided to go a bit earlier when you were at least awake.

They met up the same nurse and she seems to be a bit more relaxed today. She even let you be alone with you.


Your pov


You hear the door unlock and you see two men walk in. You were surprised, it was Alfred and Feliciano! Those two kind men who drove you to this place. They couldn't stop smiling at you either.

"Just push this button if you need anything" the nurse said and closed the door

"Ciao bella!" Feliciano said happily and hugged you. It felt pretty awkward to hug him so you didn't hug you back.

"Hi dude how are you doing?" Alfred asked already worried of what they have done to you. Feliciano released you and you looked down on the floor walking towards the window. This was when your asperger activated. It was hard to talk and communicate with people and it was even harder with them because you didn't know them.

"Not good" You whispered, Alfred and Felicianos smile was replaced with a frown

"In what way bella?" Feliciano asked walking closer to you to get contact with you

"Um...the weird medicine" You mumbled, never turned around to face Feliciano and Alfred

"You mean, they mixed it up?" Alfred asked

"...yeah..made...my right eye...blind....."

"Those idiots! Did you tell them about it?" Alfred said getting angry

"no"

"What sort of disability do you have?" Feliciano asked, he and Alfred didn't know why you were here to begin with.

"Asperger and adhd" Well that explained why you seem to have a hard time to talk to them but they aren't sure about the adhd one.

You then felt two arms wrapp around your waist. You yelped a bit by the sudden contact but didn't try to do anything. You kept staring at the clear blue sky.

Alfred, who was the one that hugged you from behind rest his head on your shoulder.

"Remember when your mom said that you were insane?" He asked, how could you forget? You nodded in respons. Alfred softly turned you around, bent down to your eye level since he was a bit taller than you. You looked down back at the floor, you just couldn't look up at him. It was like something prevented you to do so.

"She's wrong, you're not insane" Alfred stated, you didn't know what to say. How could she be wrong? You have always been trouble to her and dad and now this Alfred says that she is wrong?

"Ve he's right, nothting is wrong with you or anyone else here" Feliciano said

"Why...are you...here?" You asked ignoring what they said, they didn't know what they talked about according to you.

"We want to help you dude, to get you out of here?" Alfred said

"Why?" You asked, why do they want to help you? Why not anyone else?

"Because we don't think you belong here" Feliciano said

"Yeah you deserve to live a better life, being treated like anyone else despite of your disablities" Alfred said

Who was these two? You do not deserve to live a better life. You are different from the others and that's why you are here.

You felt your vision started to blur "no! not again" You thought. You started to lose your balance and lean in Alfred's chest.

"Dude are you okay?! Dude!" Alfred said getting scared

"Ve I call the nurse" Feliciano said running to the button and pushed it before he went out of the room to call more nurses.



TO BE CONTINUED
I hope you like it :)

What I love is all of you who have comment about having asperger. I don't know much about it myself but it makes me inspired and it's brave of you to share what you are going through. And also that you recognise yourself in this because that is actually my main goal in my fanfics ^^ 

I do not own anything except the plot
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:iconlucarioniteofaph:
lucarioniteofAPH Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student General Artist
(I was reading over the comments geez there is a lot of "role-playing" so YAY IM JOINING THE CLUB)

Me: *walks into WM* OK THIS IS SERIOUS THERE IS THIS AWESOME FANFIC AND THE READER HAS DISORDERS AND HER MOM IS A PHSYCO HELP ME KILL HER.
*runs out with Switzerland's gun, Hungary's frying pan, Japan's katana, Romano's tank, England's friends, America's air force, Austria's piano, Russia's magic metal pipe of pain, and Pasta*
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Missem111003 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Me: *sigh* Why do emotions have to be so complicated?
2p!Me: We should go kill mumsy. *grins*
Me: *confused* Why?
2p!Me(Emily): Come one! *drags me out of hospital*
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:iconnightmare1301:
Nightmare1301 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014
*takes out flaming katanas* well see ya soon just gonna go kill the mom any one in? *smiles sweetly*
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:iconcassietheangel:
CassieTheAngel Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Artist
2fab4you
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:iconaskhetaliasouleater:
Askhetaliasouleater Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Our mother put extra disabilities
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:icontheanimeangel:
Theanimeangel Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
*me, Switzy, the Slavics, and the Baltics enter world meeting*
Me: HI GUYS! I HAVE SOMETHING TO SHOW YOU! I'M TARGETING THIS WOMAN! *shows fanfic and points to mother* SHE IS MY TARGET!

Countries: *read fanfic* 
Germany: Zhis woman is a horrible....
Hungary: THAT B*TCH. I AM JOINING!
Everyone: HELL YEAH!
Me: THEN LETS GO! THE ARMY IS COMPLETE WE WILL NOW DESTROY THEM!
*everyone runs out with weapons* 
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:iconitsinmybloodyouknow:
Itsinmybloodyouknow Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yo, I bring The Homestuck.
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:iconlittleatlantis:
LittleAtlantis Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014
I SHALL BRING THE OTHER HALF OF THE ARMY
*breaks down 2p World meeting room door*
YO WE NEED TO BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF THIS BITCH*shows fanfic & points to mother in distance*
James:I WILL FUCKING JOIN!
Oliver:*eyes starts swirling*Ok poppet~
Everyone:FUCK YES!
Me:*grabs giant master sword*MOVE OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icontheanimeangel:
Theanimeangel Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
:D YESHHHHHHH!!!!!! THIS BITCH IS SOOOOO DEAD >:D
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:iconlittleatlantis:
LittleAtlantis Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
Everyone:WE'RE OFF TO KILL THE MOTHER THE MOTHER WE'RE OFF TO KILL THE MOTHER WHEREVER WE MAY GO~
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:iconmydepictionoffiction:
MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I mean Notiana with a shovel. A bloody big shovel. Bloody in more ways than one.
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:iconmydepictionoffiction:
MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I, Argentina, will bring a tank and bazookas to war.
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:iconyukisuoh01:
YukiSuoh01 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
welll except Italy....he will bring white flag
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:iconmichealawood:
michealawood Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
I have aspergers and ADHD and as soon as I saw the title I clicked on this because u just don't see many fan fictions about asperger readers
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:iconmydepictionoffiction:
MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yea, I have both of these disorders. This c***t is too bitchy to be my real mum though. FanFic parents suck.
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:icontammydy:
Tammydy Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry I cannot relate to the reader medically, but mentally yes
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:iconcrazyhetalialover13:
CrazyHetaliaLover13 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"Ve I call the nurse" Nice English there, Italy. XD
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:iconstarclanslasthope:
StarclansLastHope Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
ADD and Asperger

almost perfect
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:iconpockeydocterchu:
pockeydocterchu Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well usually anyone with either ADhd or just ADD alone usually has them both...Cause I do too.
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:iconstarclanslasthope:
StarclansLastHope Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
Yup.
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:iconxxivygothwolfxx:
XxIvyGothWolfxX Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
I have asperger syndrome, autism, bi-polar,and OCD, so I can really relate to this
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:iconpockeydocterchu:
pockeydocterchu Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My dad has bi-polar and PTSD ( post traumatic stress disorder)  (A asperger syndrom is a kind of autism) (I also know this because I have a brother who has aspergers and I've learned a lot from it.)  Sorry if I seem rude! DX
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MARRY-ME-BROTHER Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is like writing my life dead doitsu man....
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sucksatspanish05 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
I understand the reader a bit I have add and though undiagnosed it's very very  likely I have asperger syndrome. It can be very hard especially when the average person refuses to try and understand.
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wizardturtlegirl Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
This story is so amazing! I have adhd and add. So when i saw the title i was like "OH YUS".
:iconawesomeplz:
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:iconayanna-vvision:
ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I haz ADHD!!!
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:iconlunaangel-eclipse:
LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
MOORRREE!!!!!
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:icondauntlesspansycake:
DauntlessPansycake Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
This may be the first fanfic I've read where the reader has Aspergers or ADHD. As soon as I saw the title, I immediately went on and read the story as I suffer from Aspergers too. I hope you continue to make more chapters along the way! Ve~
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:iconstoneunicorn1:
Stoneunicorn1 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
I'll see if I can start Part 4 tomorrow :)
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:iconask-black-rainbow:
Ask-Black-Rainbow Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014
ermagerd! awesome!! keep up the writing! 
IDK if I have ADHD.... but my brother and dad have it... though since we moved my dad has gotten calmer, and it's almost gone!
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Shinobipika65 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Artist
I think I just have ADD or was ADHD I really don't know but I have a cousin with Asperger and me and him get along sometimes he shows me how to play different games and he helps me out on them when I get stuck but he's almost always glued to the computer or his kindle. 
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Mochi-and-2P-Rose Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

what a coincidence that the reader has ADHD and Aspergers

 

I have both too

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:iconsusanlucariofan16:
SusanLucarioFan16 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I have both too
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:iconmochi-and-2p-rose:
Mochi-and-2P-Rose Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice
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:iconskritdlez:
Skritdlez Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
I only have Aspergers so i can relate to the character as well
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:iconmochi-and-2p-rose:
Mochi-and-2P-Rose Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me too
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:iconcloneace:
CloneAce Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student General Artist
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOREEEE
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:iconjeffthekiller99:
JeffTheKiller99 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I seriously love this story, you should make more! :)
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:iconyamiyuki1:
yamiyuki1 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The reader scared me, I thought she would have a 'meltdown ',those are scary. It's like someone having an emotional frenzy and destroying whatever is in their path. I've seen enough of those to get the heck away when that happens.
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4nonny4 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist

part 4 please its so goodClap I love itHeart 

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xTMNTx Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
:iconfranceheplz: :iconhonhonhonplz: :icondoitsuplz: :iconitalyflagplz: :iconjapanpastaplz: :iconprussiakeseseplz: :icongeritahug1plz: :iconyaygermanyplz: :iconyayitaliaplz: :iconyayjapanplz:
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CommanderPrussia Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Man, getting very interesting.:) (Smile) 

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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:iconladyoflegends:
LadyofLegends Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Writer
WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME?!?!?!?!? *besides the obvious* WHY AM I GOING BLIND?!?!!?
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:iconsusanlucariofan16:
SusanLucarioFan16 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
your doing a good job writing these kinds of stories, it makes people who have aspergers or adhd or even both, it makes them happy to have a part in hetalia

I should know i have both and i enjoy it :)

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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

I'm right hand I would doe if my right eye went blind...well not really more like I wouldn't be able to move around without hurting myself

 

I have ADHD

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:iconjuneanightwind:
juneanightwind Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist
my ADHD lessened to ADD (god i hate math) but i really enjoy this  story can't wait for the next part
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:iconask-jemi:
ask-Jemi Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dumb medicine... dumb mother....

great story!
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:iconxironrose:
Xironrose Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love it so far!:)
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:iconguardianarchangel:
guardianarchangel Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
i have asberger or autism as well
this is a good story so far
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