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"Alright I think I've packed everything that I need" You mumbled, it was friday and Alfred had invited you and some friends at his place for a slumber party, also known as sleepover. You did look forward to it, school was about to start and it felt good to meet everyone after the summer outside school. You were attending in W world academy by the way.

You look over your things, a big bag with your pyjamas, your favourite plushie, toothbrush, toothpaste, your favourite book, your butter sock (always good to carry around just in case) and also your sleeping bag. You took your bag and walked downstairs, "I'm going now!" You shouted to your parents.

"Okay sweetie have fun" Your mum said

"I will" You said putting on your shoes and jacket and walked outside. It was the middle of August and you could feel in the wind that the autumn was on its way already. Luckily Alfred didn't live that far away from your house.

When you got close to the house you saw Kiku just a few meters ahead of you. You ran up to him "Hey Kiku" You said

"Oh, konnichiwa (Name)-chan" Kiku said politely and bowed

"I guess you're on your way to Alfred" You said

"Hai, sharr we wark together?" Kiku asked blushing slightly

"Sure, not that I wanted to go alone anyway" You blushed and walked up to Alfred's big house with Kiku.

You two walked up to the front door and Kiku rang on the doorbell.

"S'up dude and dudette" Alfred said happily and pulled you into a bear hug

"A-alfred "cough" I-I c-can't "cough" Breath!" You tried to get air into your lugns

"Ooops sorry lady" Alfred chuckled and and then awkwardly gave Kiku a bro hug.

"Is anyone else bus here?" You asked taking off your jacket and shoes, kiku did the same

"Yup you two are the last ones here to come, the dinner is about to get ready but you can dump your stuff at my room upstairs. You know first door to the left" Alfred said returning to the kitchen.

"Hai Arfred-kun" Kiku said and you two walked upstairs and was greeted by Matthew, Ivan, Francis, Yao, Arthur, Feliciano and Ludwig. You all greeted each other with hugs and kisses (on the cheek).

"Why aren't you all downstairs?" You asked when you all settled down.

"Alfred says that he is making a "surprise" " Arthur said sarcastically

"I think it has something to do with the dinner, he has been working on it all day" Matthew whispered.

"Ve I'm happy as long as it tastes good" Feliciano said happily

"DUDES YOU CAN TOTALLY COME DOWN" Alfred screamed

"Well you heard him" Francis shrugged and you all walked downstairs and into the kitchen.Your eyes widened when you saw his table decorated with lots of food on, there was pasta, salad, fish, lobster and chicken along with some baguettes. Alfred grinned at you guys reaction.

"See? I'm not only making burgers you know" He smirked

"Well done Alfred" Ivan smiled

"Thanks bro"

You all took a plate and put everything you wanted to eat.

"(Naaame)" Alfred said appearing out of nowhere

"What?" You bluntly asked, then you saw his apron that said "Kiss the cook" Alfred grinned knowing that you got the message.

"Isn't there anything you should do?" Alfred said wrapping his arms around your waist

"Not what I know other than eat" You said bluntly wriggle out of his grasp and sat down at the table. Once everyone took their seat Alfred had his little speach.

"Thanks dudes for coming, I look forward to another year at W world academy with you all and all the other dudes and dudettes" Alfred said raising his glas.

"Grazie for inviting us over" Feliciano said and you all nodded and raised your glases as well

"Cheers" You all said and drank and ate the food

"( must say Alfred the food is trés bien" Francis said

"Ai-ya you even used some of my spices aru" Yao said

"Zhe beer isn't zhat bad" Ludwig said

"My food taste much better anyway" Arthur said

"That was your worst insult ever, ever!" Francis said annoyed at the brit

"Ve make pasta not war!" Feliciano said almost about to cry

"Ja we all now that Iggy will never admit that someone's food is better than his" You said rolling your eyes.

"I'm sorry to say it but I agree" Matthew said, he always apologise whenever it feels like he's doing something wrong even though it isn't.

"Anyways, what are we going to do once we're done with the dinner?" Kiku asked

"I was waiting for that question! We will have a quizz about American history!" Alfred

"But I don't know anything about your country, da" Ivan said

"Exacly therefore I will pair you up into teams" Alfred said

"I'm okay with it as long as I don't have to be with frog" Arthur said

"You won't you will be with Mattew, (Name) you are with Yao, Kiku you will be with Ivan and Francis and Ludwig you are one team" Alfred said

"Verdammit" Ludwig cursed

"Don't you think we make a great team non? Especially with Eu" Francis joked

"And whatever (Name) will be a winner or loser she will kiss the hero!" Alfred declared

"What?"



TO BE CONTINUED
I hope you liked it :) and yes I will do alternative endings this time including Canada :D

I don't know why I will make the quizz about american history since I don't know much myself but I'll google it up :XD:

You belong to :iconsexyamericaplz: :iconsexycanadaplz: :iconsexyrussiaplz: :iconsexyiggyplz: :iconsexygermanyplz: :iconsexyitalyplz: :iconsexyfranceplz: :iconsexychinaplz: :iconsexyjapanplz:

Hetalia belongs to Hidekaz Himaruya
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hetaliafangirl01 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015
dem smexy icons *stares with rape face*
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Kspowell2002 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015  Student Filmographer
Yaaaaass 
there me bros
im asexual so I not attracted to them besides friends
but I love reading story like this anyways because it's always fun to figure out the different writing styles of the authors 
plus ya know ITS HETALIA FOR GODS SAKE
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SakuraNekoBlaze Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Student Artist
Omg no way I belong to all of them?! Icon - 019 Oliver (Nosebleed) Freddy Nosebleed 
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Eliana89364057 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
...........which team is my darling Feli on? 
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FiveNightsAtHarmonys Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I GOT PAIRED WITH MY WIFE CHINA!!!!!!!
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adventuretimer101 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014
I want to kiss the hero so badly in real life...
My friend who act and looks like America: *walks in* Hey Kelly dudette! Want to play on your computer?! *goes on my computer and stares at me when he reads what I just said*
Me: Um......
Jacob (his name): *looks at me* Well why didn't you say so before?!?! *kisses me*
Me: *blushes and hits him* Thanks......
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Chubby333 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Dang dude, you're lucky.
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adventuretimer101 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014
It was my first kiss...... I am lucky~
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Chubby333 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
IKRRRRRR I WOULD LOVE THAT
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RoxyDanaSchlyer1218 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Student Artist
XD VERDAMMIT AMERICA I JUST LOST MY APPETITE AND ALSO SPIT ALL THE FOOD IN MY MOUTH OUT! YOU LIKE ME THAT MUCH DAM! I SHALL WIN(meaning i shall lose for that fuking kiss) AND NEVER KISS THAT GUY!(kiss him lots <3)
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RoxyDanaSchlyer1218 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Student Artist
and i dont care even if he says no matter what i end up kissing him i shall.....i dont know anymore XD
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patricia02au Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well I'm going to enjoy this~! I can't wait for the next chapter~!
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swordmastertrunks Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Student General Artist
XD This is going to get interesting
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Marshalleeslover9 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Student General Artist
what no Spain :[
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RoseEmma1 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014
Pfft poor Ludwig x) (no offense intended to Francis) 



I repeat reader chan at what Alfred said
....What? :/
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WholeWheatHoneyOat Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
Poor Luddy....

-_- Al, you sly dog...
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Smilesthepegasister Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Love it! Cant wait for the next one!
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Stoneunicorn1 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
Thank you :D
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Smilesthepegasister Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student General Artist
No problem!
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:iconthatredcherryblossom:
Its very good but there are a few grammar and spelling errors. I am not trying to be rude so please don't be offended, but would you like to know them so you can fix them?
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Stoneunicorn1 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
Thank you, if you like o3o
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:iconthatredcherryblossom:
Well when you wrote “Is anyone else bus here?” I don't think bus should have been there mabye but us. Also “You tried to get air into your lugns” you spelt lungs wrong. "Not what I know other than eat" you should replace what with that. “Alfred said raising his glas.” You should spell it glass. “raised your glases” again glasses. “( must say Alfred” I must or just must say. “My food taste much better” tastes- because English is a really awkward language (that's coming from a native speaker (even I don't get it sometimes)). “always apologise whenever it feels” apologises (again English is weird). “have a quizz” it's just quiz. And that's really it. I hope this isn't rude seeming. If you want I would be happy to check fanfics for spelling and grammar. Also remember to put full stops or commas at the end of sentences. :D
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Stoneunicorn1 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
Some of my typos seems to be because of my dyslexia and some for my lack of english, maybe. Anyways I correct it when I feel like it :XD:
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:iconthatredcherryblossom:
Typos are fine sometimes I have speech typos(is that a thing) where I try to say something but say something random instead. Once I shouted that I got a Spain on my shirt.
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dragon-diary Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
nice begin 
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Stoneunicorn1 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
Thank you :)
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dragon-diary Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
np
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LadyofLegends Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Student Writer
This sounds interesting. :D
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Stoneunicorn1 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014
Mhm :D
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ask-Jemi Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, stories like this is why you're my favourite writer!
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Stoneunicorn1 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014
Thank you :)
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REL-7 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
COOL!! Can't vait for the next one!!:D
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Stoneunicorn1 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014
Thank you :D, awesome 8D
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