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Hetaliaxreader Wife kidnapping Part 11

You sat in the big car together with Ivan, Feliciano, Francis, Arthur, Ludwig, Kiku, Yao and Alfred. You couldn't belive that you are fnally back in Odessa thanks to these men, you got to know each other during the trip. They were all from different countries but worked together to help people with something that the police couldn't.

"Ve I want to eat pasta!" Feliciano whined

"Dude I haven't eaten junk food for hours" Alfred said

"We stopped at McDonald's for just two hours ago" Arthur said annoyed

"There it is!" You cheered pointed at your house

When the car stopped you sprinted out and ran up to the front door and knocked. It didn't take long to see your mother open it and you threw yourself in her arms.

"Oh (Name), my (Name)" she cried, you see your dad and grandma stand right behind your mother. You let go of your mother and hugged them as well. Both Alfred and Feliciano started to cry at the little reunion. Arthur tried to keep a pokerface, same with the others. Except Ivan he just smiled.

You turned to face the men and your parents thanked them for what they did.

"Maybe you want to stay over for dinner?" You asked

"Dude that would be like totally awesome!" Alfred cheered

"Vhat he is trying to say is zhat ve vould love to" Ludwig said

"Ve I can help out!" Feliciano said raising his hand

"I can too, it would be ungentlemanly if I didn't" Arthur said

"Non mon amie, you can lay the table" Francis said putting his hand on Arthur's shoulder

"Shut it frog face I'm not five and I'm a great cook!" Arthur snapped

Well he ended up helping you anyway, well he cut vegetables if that counts. While you, Feliciano and Arthur was in the kitchen, the rest was having a conversation with your parents.

Once the food was finished you all gathered around the table.

"It's very good da" Ivan said

"Thank you, Feliciano helped me out choosing spices" You said smiling at the italian

"Ai-ya it's well mixed aru" Yao smiled

"Well, it's good for being healthy food" Alfred said satisfied  

"Arigato gozaimasu for the food (Name) it's time for us to reave" Kiku said sadly, it was getting late and their work was done. They will go back home to their individual countries now.

"Aw" You sighed disappointed, you hoped they would stay a bit longer. But you understood that they also have a home they want to go back to.

You hugged each other goodbye until it was only you and (fav character left)

"If you want to stay in touch" He said blushing and handed you a card with a telephone number and an email address.

"Thank you" You smiled, kissed his cheek and quickly closed the door

A few months later Yao and the others found the man behind the source of wife kidnapping in Odessa. After the interview you had it showed up to be a big help to find out who it was behind all of it. And also it made many organizations to keep an eye on kyrgyzstan where the kidnappings still take place today.

Yeah it turned out to be a bit short but I had no idea what to write xP

I hope you enjoyed the story as much as I did ^^

I do not own anything except the plot

Hetalia belongs to Hidekaz Himaruya
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FRANCEISWONDERFUL2 Featured By Owner 19 hours ago  New member
>W< eeeeeee~ Lovino somehow gave me his number!!! ))
ChocolateLover2003 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  New member
I have no words but this.

AMAZING!!!! Heart Hug :happybounce: 
S1lvermoon Featured By Owner Edited Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Loved it.
demonzarecool101 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014
I love this story!!!!!!
cupcakecreep2p Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Lol freedom started playing when I began this chapter
Romacat Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Of course my dear Arthur! I'll keep in touch with you~ Lol this was a great story and i really enjoyed it. It's scary that this kind of thing happens in the world though.
OTAKUIN23 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My Hug is Yours OMG OMG OMG Totally fan girl screamed just a moment a go *fan girl squeal*
nannasue Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
Wow i really like your fanfic's its really good describing and emotions. just asking but does anyone know what you go on to write fanfictions please ??:| (Blank Stare) 
MMORPGWizard Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Woah, woah, woah, woah, woah, WOAH, WOAH. HOLD UP.

Yes, the ending was happy and cheesy and all that but is my character still married?
temaitafoeva Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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